Sunday, June 8, 2008

Narcissit

Take me away from reality,
From the suffocation and hypocrisy ...
from the humiliation and appreciation...

Take me away from all of them...
'Them' ....whom i call friends
with whom i share the details of my mundane life...

I pretend i dont understand
I'm immature as they say, im eccentric, im a hypocrite
I'm not you and i dont want to be you...
Leave me alone...For some things are better left that way...

Leave me alone from your criticisms
As I can never be perfect

Let me live my own life
Let me breathe, let me be complicated to the core
Let me dream about my kind of tomorrow
Let me cherish my kind of past memories

Stop laughing at me
Stop trying to make me perfect
Leave me alone...For some things are better left that way...

Leave me alone...


Let me celebrate my kind of life...

4 comments:

GREY said...

nice...but why narcissistic? u cud hav put it in a better way...it smells of pathos...u seem to be a self-made woman...who loves her creator(ahem)... ;-)any ways...lemme tell u something timetested, cliched, but the ultimate truth...for those who feel, the world is a tragedy, for those who observe n think, the world is a comedy...nothing is bad or good, its the way u look at things...all that matters is this mate, what a man can do...what a man can't(yea,yea, jack sparrow...i know, not mine)neways...pretty creative nonetheless...cheer 'o...n stay classic...in this queen of the planets...

greywindz@gmail.com
grey sands(orkut)

Sanjay said...
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Sanjay said...

hey...nice written but I m afraid it sounds like you close the eyes on a sunny day and think that it is dark outside...lady dont try to escape from crititisism, sadness, satire etc...listen to it and if you dont like it just ignore it as if it doesnt exist...no point taking it to your heart and feel bad about it and write negatives....

SB, bassanjay@gmail.com

roshni said...

hey !! sarmistha how we are all starngers to each other ,inspite of spending so much time together do we really know what lies beneath and what one is actually made of ?? there is so much pathos in those words u have written ...I always thought u to be the happiest and most cheerful person on earth